Comments on: You’re Creeping Me Out

By: It’s The End of NaNo As I Know It • Catherine-Haines.com

It’s The End of NaNo As I Know It • Catherine-Haines.com — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 03:26:59 +0000

[...] scenes that wasn’t all wrapped up in other stuff. Also, Ciar appears. Whether he is being less creepy is all up to [...]

By: Rick

Rick — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 21:02:54 +0000

@Catherine: ooo.. okay now thats creepy lol there we go rape factor has official deemed it super disturbing… (Y )

By: Catherine

Catherine — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 23:33:21 +0000

@Rick: Right before this scene, his brother told him to just rape her. He provided visual aides in an attempt to inspire him.

And it’s creepy anyhow – he is in her room, without her consent, and about to magically mess with her mind and violate her that way. Doesn’t matter that he thinks he is doing it out of love.

By: Rick

Rick — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:59:09 +0000

LOL! Its creepy, but Idk not thattt creepy lol. Its cause i probably have to read litterature thats creepy lol. Um, Idk the vibe i get is obssesion yes, but like i sympathize for him and feel that he is so in love, and that he is infatuated not a creeper. Just for an idea, I would include more vulgar, sexual references, like pertaining to her actual women features. IDk that was what i got from that. I feel its unrequited love rather than creepy pedophile looking out window.

By: Catherine

Catherine — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 01:02:08 +0000

@Mary: Ha ha ha. When I was originally plotting this out, I basically described him as "The alternate character interpretation of [that character], just played straight". Yes, Ciar has had a heck of a lot of character development on top of the creepy, with motivations and stuff to explain why his rules != our rules but... they're still not appropriate and he'll get called on this later on. No rewardees for the stalking.

By: Mary

Mary — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:59:31 +0000

Ciar rather reminds me of a character popular with young hormonal teenage girls. Though they describe that character’s antics as romantic… O.o

By: Wendy

Wendy — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 11:17:05 +0000

Oooh, I like! O.o

By: Meli

Meli — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 05:16:39 +0000

I know no editing. I just couldn’t help it! :B

By: Catherine

Catherine — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 05:09:09 +0000

@Meli: First rule of NaNo (not the first, but it’s a biggie): no editing. Just keep going forward, not back.

And no, I’m not, sorry! There’ll be a proper page thing like the other stories, but the only way the novel will be read in full by my non-betas/editorial people etc. Is if it’s published.

By: Meli

Meli — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 05:07:51 +0000

Eww, creepy creepy. Fantastic job. One little typo: “their” in the first paragraph should be “there.”

You going to let us read this when you’re done? :dances: