Posts Tagged ‘Blood Bound’

I’m Pondering Word Counts

First of all: I reached the 45k mark for The Circled Green. So hooray for that. My goal is to reach 55k by the end of the month, which means I have to write about 500 words a day. As that’s what I have been writing for the past little bit, that shouldn’t be too much of a problem.

What I’m finding interesting about The Circled Green is that right now I can’t get a handle on its length. When I wrote my first draft of Blood Bound I used 80k as a guide to how close I was, and when I finished it 80k was the total of that draft.

The Circled Green isn’t like that.

At first I used 70k as the guideline – nice and in the middle.

As The Circled Green went on, and things started moving faster than I originally thought, I guessed it might come down to 60k. But now that other things are happening, and I know I need to go back and add some description and further scenes etc. it looks like it might be up to 80k, same as Blood Bound.

So I guess I’ll just have to keep writing and see how this one goes.

She’s A Vampire (Writer)

Last night I went to bed at about 11. About two and a half hours later I woke up with the burning desire to write something. Normally I would roll over and go to sleep but this time I was afraid that if I did do that I’d lose it. It was a new beginning to Blood Bound, and I like it. It takes the basic idea, the sentence of “I didn’t believe vampires were real until my brother came home from one of the undead” and expands on it. It’s a lot smoother, and it brings forward the voice and the setting much better than the original draft.

What I have also been up to, besides working on The Circled Green, is making playlists. Helps me organise my thoughts a lot, which is cool. Right now the character focus has been on Lauren, and here’s one of the songs.

It’s Vampire by Xandria.

So would you kiss the sun goodbye
And give your life to never die?

Another Blood Bound Short

Over at her blog, Prophecy Of The Sisters author Michelle Zink hosts a thing called Thursday Night Write1 where she posts something – an image, a song maybe – and then we have to write for a set amount of time whatever is inspired by that image.

What came out of her latest Thursday Night Write was this, a short piece from the long history of Athanasios, a character mentioned repeatedly in Blood Bound, but doesn’t actually appear until the sequel.

Not that this story is from Athanasios’s POV, of course.


He clutched the make-shift stake so hard splinters embedded themselves in his skin. His other hand was empty, held over his heart as if to keep it from bursting in fear. His lips moved in silent prayer as he tried to quietly make his way down the streets. His shoes made a shuffling sound against the stones; the sound was as deafening as the blood pounding in his ears.

Blood. That was what they wanted.

Blood. That was why they had to be stopped.

Something moved in the corner of his vision. A door opened, and a shadow appeared. Then the shadow became a man – the man he was seeking. The man who came into town, strange little boy in tow, and never left his room during the day. He was pale, and the maid reported that he was cold, and he never came to church.

While the maid never officially mentioned the bite marks on her neck he knew that was what she was hiding. That was the confirmation he had needed.

And that was why the hunted was now stalking the hunter.

The monster saw him, smiled… then turned and walked back into the house. He made a point of leaving the door open. An invitation.

He could not pass up such an invitation. Perhaps if he had not been so eager to slay the monster he would have wondered why it would have let him get this far, and so easily. But instead all his thoughts were consumed with the deed he would have to do, and the rewards he would reap after.

The monster would not touch her again. And she would be so grateful to her hero. How could she not love him after that?

Inside the room was like a tomb, even more silent than the streets outside. It was just him, the monster and the strange little boy.

The child was the first to speak. Its accent was odd, and the language one he did not hear outside of church – he knew enough of it to understand what the boy was saying. “Father.” It was the whine of an impatient child, a child told to wait by a parent. The boy looked… hungry.

The monster placed a hand on the boy’s shoulder, then nodded at the one who had come to kill him. “It seems you know what we are. I had hoped that we would leave without it having to come to this. The dead always make a mess of things.”

“Abomination!” he spat, raising the stake with both hands. He almost looked like a threat.

“You really should not have come alone,” the monster said after a moment’s consideration. “You really should not have come at all. But I suppose that cannot be helped now.”

“Father,” whined the child again. “I am hungry.” He fidgeted under the monster’s firm hold.

“Well, at least it is a good thing you are here now. A man has to feed his child one way or another.” He let go of the boy.

The boy smiled, revealing two long fangs.

The man merely sighed. After all, what good would screaming do?

  1. Which for me is more Friday Morning Write, but whatever []

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