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Teaser Tuesday: Snow Bees

For last year’s NaNo I was working on a reimagining of The Snow Queen set in modern London at Christmas. However I haven’t worked on it at all since the middle of November, which was when my grandmother died. It took me a while to come back to Winterheart because, well, my grandmother is in it. She and I were talking about my writing (which she was so very supportive of) and I mentioned what I was planning, and because there was a grandmother in the story did she mind if I named her after her. Well, she didn’t want to name the character after her because she always hated her name; as a sort of compromise I named the character what Nana wanted to be called and based the character on her. She was very pleased with this, but you can see why it was hard after her death to open up the WIP and see her sitting there in the text.

Anyway I am finally back to working on Winterheart and thought I’d share a tiny bit from the first part, which was written at the start of November. I hope you enjoy it.

“The queen of the snow bees lives up in the clouds, the thick black ones like over there. Although sometimes she has a castle high on the mountains. From the sky, or from the mountain – wherever she is, it’s always very high up – she looks down at us and what we are doing, and she sends the little snow bees down to us to spy on us and report back so she can learn about us.”

By this time Kyle and Gabrielle were sitting on the window seat, where Annabelle had joined them; all three teenagers were listening in rapt attention, and even Beatrice was silent, humming no more.

“At night, during the winter, she comes down to earth and wanders the streets. She looks through the windows at all the happy families and all the sleeping children, and she envies us all.”

“Why’s that, Nan?” asked Annabelle.

“Because we are warm, and we are loved. Those are two things that she is denied thus she wants.”

NaNo: Day 18

I managed to write the required 1667 words yesterday, despite yesterday being a bit of a trying day (my grandmother went into hospital). I still haven’t caught up yet, but I haven’t fallen behind any further, so that’s something.

Anyway, I realised that I have yet to post any NaNo snippets, so here we go! The rough, unedited opening paragraphs of Winterheart – I have warned you. Also known as the scene that made me go “so apparently my novel is about evil snow”.

It was going to be a very white Christmas that year.

The snow that fell from the clouds hanging ominously above London was not heavy but it was continuous. Indeed, there was not a time when someone glanced out the window and did not see at the very least more than a few flakes of snow fluttering down towards the thick layer of cold white that covered the streets and the roofs of the houses and cars that lined them.

If it was possible, people stayed inside, wrapped up warm and gathered around the heaters and fireplaces that were available to them. Those who were unfortunate enough to still have work and errands to run – as life does not stop simply because of snow, especially when it was only a few days until Christmas, and thus there was still much to be done – bundled up as much as they could before braving the cold weather outside the safety of their homes.

But it was as if something was looming in the air that warned people to stay inside if they absolutely had to. Not just because it was cold and perhaps not the safest time to drive, but that there was something out there that just simply was not right. Something worrisome, something dangerous, something that could only be avoided if one stayed inside and did not look at the countless white flakes that danced in the air, riding the small breezes as if only they were allowed to enjoy the cold season.

As if it was only safe for them. Or perhaps unsafe because of them.

A Peek Into The Brain

I am one of whose brain is constantly working; it’s constantly throwing up new ideas, and I am constantly going, “Damnit, not again!”. Rebekah and JK accuse me of stealing all the ideas in the country. They make me laugh; they’re good like that. They’re also very good at picking me up when I am having a down day and ask the dreaded question of “do you think I am a good writer?”

I have enough WIPs going at the moment, so I am not going to be starting anything any time soon. Well, not gonna start anything properly. But sometimes you just gotta scribble something down just to get it to shut up. I find prologues are good like that.

So, have a scribbly prologue, as an early Christmas treat. :) It’s very rough, but it sort of shows what my brain leaks out when I try and keep it shut. I’ll try and put up the beginning of Lionheart later in the week.


That night, a hero died.

His battlefield was not some strange and sandy place, some country on the other side of the world. No, his battlefield was his home, that place he had chosen to protect, and had risen up out of the darkness to protect those who could not protect themselves.

The battle had raged on the tops of roofs, that spot out of reach from the common person. It raged in the early hours of the morning, when every, it seemed, other sane person had long since turned off their lights and gone to bed.

This was insanity, and he knew it. But somebody had to do it. Somebody had to go out there, face hidden from the world and save it while it slept. Well, perhaps not the world, but this city at least.

The fight was brutal, blows coming thick and fast. Sometimes he landed them, and sometimes they were landed on him. One blow – was it lucky? Not for him at least – struck him on the corner of the eye, and he staggered, just for half a second.

But still, half a second was still half a second too much. It was just the opening his opponent had been waiting for, and both sides knew it. A few more blows and he was flat on his back, staring up at the person who had defeated him. A boot pressed down against his throat kept him from struggling too much, although it did not keep him from trying.

The victor reached behind them and withdrew the gun. The hero closed his eyes – it was not cowardice, he told himself in his last moments. Nothing he had done these past thirty years was cowardice.

“Take a bow, Nightshadow.”

The gun went off, and there was one less hero protecting the streets.

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